That was great - very lyrical. I love the concept of retelling their story like this and it fits the scope of the universe.
May I make a tiny suggestion? You've got "Great Old Town of Car Diff". How about going back to the original Welsh, which is still used for Cardiff, Caerdydd? It splits as Caer Dydd (according to Wikipedia the "dydd" is either a mutation of "Taff", the city's river, or connected with a Roman bloke called Aulus Didius Gallus; in any case caer means castle). "Great Old Town of Caer Dydd" just has a more mythical ring to half-Welsh me! :)
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May I make a tiny suggestion? You've got "Great Old Town of Car Diff". How about going back to the original Welsh, which is still used for Cardiff, Caerdydd? It splits as Caer Dydd (according to Wikipedia the "dydd" is either a mutation of "Taff", the city's river, or connected with a Roman bloke called Aulus Didius Gallus; in any case caer means castle). "Great Old Town of Caer Dydd" just has a more mythical ring to half-Welsh me! :)