crazycatt71-Who he thinks of-Jack/10th Doctor-R

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Title: Who He Thinks Of
Author: crazycatt71
Challenge: 2011 Doctor/Jack Bingo Fest
Rating: R
Prompt used: because it's a spoiler, it's at the end of the story.
Pairing: Jack, 10th Doctor
Spoilers: none for Torchwood or Dr Who
This is un-betaed so all mistakes are mine.
Summary: Who does Jack always think of?
Diclaimer: I own nothing, I'm just having fun.

 

Jack smiled as the young man sat down next to him. He was at a bar on a space station around some planet he didn't know the name of and couldn't be bothered to learn. There had been many through out the years, too many, and there would be too many more in the years that followed. The man offered to buy Jack a drink, he accepted. Small talk and drinks flowed and eventually the invite to come home was offered. Jack accepted willingly, it beat sleeping alone. He followed his new friend back to his tiny little room. The moment the door closed, Jack pushed the man against the wall and kissed him, stopping any attempts at conversation before they began. During a flurry of hungry kisses, clothes were removed. The man pulled Jack toward his narrow bed, and gently pushed Jack on to it. He kissed his way down Jack's body before settling between his thighs. He slowly ran a finger down the inside of Jack's thigh, before wrapping his hand around his cock. Jack stroked his cheek, grinning, before giving his head a gentle push. The young man licked his lips, then bent over, taking Jack into his mouth. Jack groaned as he sucked and licked. He shut his eyes and gave himself to the sensations. When he felt himself close to the edge, he pulled back, causing his companion to look up in surprise. Jack smiled and pulled him close for a kiss before flipping him over. As he slowly pushed into the willing body, he closed his eyes, pretending in was the one he really wanted. In his mind, he pictured a long, lean, pale man, with tawny colored hair, brown eyes, and a warm smile. He thrust harder, nearing his release. As his orgasm washed over him, he cried out a name.
"Doctor!"

Prompt used: Jack will do anyone, but he always thinks of the Doctor

Comments

[silvermoon07.livejournal.com]

Aw, this was so sweet and so heartbreaking all at once. Poor Jack, only being able to dream that he's with his Doctor. And I loved how you described Ten at the end, this part was so gorgeous:

In his mind, he pictured a long, lean, pale man, with tawny colored hair, brown eyes, and a warm smile. He thrust harder, nearing his release. As his orgasm washed over him, he cried out a name.
"Doctor!"

You did an excellent job with the prompt, it was brilliant! :D

[crazycatt71.livejournal.com]

Thank-you. I wasn't sure if it would work at first, then it just all fell together.

[scifiangel.livejournal.com]

brilliantly written and wonderfully sad.

[crazycatt71.livejournal.com]

thanks

[rrr-nightingale.livejournal.com]

Such a sad drabble. "Jack accepted willingly, it beat sleeping alone." - This is very him, I think. I hope one day he can be with his Doctor!
Thank you for writing this)

[crazycatt71.livejournal.com]

I'm glad you liked it

[ghostinthemist.livejournal.com]

So very Jack. So very sad. In my mind Jack will have his Doctor someday...sigh.

[crazycatt71.livejournal.com]

I like to think that Jack & the Doctor will be together too.