Jovialien: Cobwebs of the Heart (Jack/Doctor) [PG]

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Title: Cobwebs of the Heart
Author:jovialien
Challenge 2011 Doctor/Jack Bingo
Prompt Used: Cobweb
Characters: Jack, Owen
Ratings: PG, very very slight spoilers for Runaway Bride
Disclaimer: I don't own these characters and I'm not making any money from this. If anyone at the BBC wants to offer me a job I'd be happy to change that though!
Summary: Drabble He's used to cleaning up after the Doctor, but maybe some day the Doctor will clean up his own mess

Jack flicked his torch over the ceiling and winced as he spotted the cobwebs stuck there. Racnoss. “Spiders. I hate spiders.”

“Finally, something he's not into,” Owen muttered, pushing past and shaking his head at the mess. “He always cause this sort of chaos?”

“The Doctor?” Jack smiled. “Every time.”

“Typical,” Owen complained, shaking his wet foot and looking at the destruction. “And does he ever bother to fix the things he's broken?”

“I hope so,” Jack whispered. Shaking off the thought, he nodded. “Come on, we've got work to do.”

Comments

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

"I hope so."

Awww, poor Jack

[jovialien.livejournal.com]

*hugs Jack* He does have a bit of a raw deal sometimes.

[scifiangel.livejournal.com]

You sure know how to yank on the heart strings with just a few words. Poor Jack.

[jovialien.livejournal.com]

Thanks very much, of course with Jack there are so many moments like that to choose from. Hopefully as many good ones though.

[ebineez01.livejournal.com]

love :D

[jovialien.livejournal.com]

*grins goofily* Thanks!

[redpearl-cao.livejournal.com]

oh Jack...

[jovialien.livejournal.com]

*hugs Jack*

[silvermoon07.livejournal.com]

Aw, poor Jack, I feel so bad for him having to clean up after the Doctor, and that particular event was really very messy. *hugs for Jack*

You did an excellent job with the prompt, thanks so much.

[jovialien.livejournal.com]

Jack needs lots of hugs sometimes! Especially with that job.

Thanks very much, I'm glad you liked it!

[adafrog.livejournal.com]

Poor Jack.

[jovialien.livejournal.com]

He is a bit, but I do try to make it up to him sometimes.

[ent-alter-ego.livejournal.com]

This is beautiful - your words capture so very much. Owen's snark, Jack's hope that he can be 'fixed,' and the Doctor's habit of leaving loose ends. Lovely.

[jovialien.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much, it's only recently I've been able to start getting Owen's voice properly so I'm glad he worked! I'm glad you liked it. :)