Scifiangel First Time (Nine/Jack) [Adult]

[scifiangel.livejournal.com]

Title: First Time
Author: Scifiangel
Challenge: Amnesty 2010 - First Time
Beta: None. All mistakes are mine.
Series: Double drabble trilogy
Pairing: Jack/Nine
Rating: Adult
Warnings and Spoilers: Semi-graphic Sex. No spoilers
Disclaimer: I don’t own our lovely boys. They belong to the BBC. I make no money from this, much to my sorrow. Full disclaimer under cut.

Summary: Double drabble. 100 words for each character.

Author’s notes: This is a sequel to my double drabble "Fear," but can be read as a stand alone.

"First Time"

Comments

[silvermoon07.livejournal.com]

Oh wow! This was really very sexy and so very naughty and beautiful all at once. :)

I loved how you wrote both of their reactions, that was really fantastic. And how their thoughts were so different. The Doctor's hesitant and unsure, and Jack confident and overjoyed. And the last thought of Jack's was simply gorgeous and so heartfelt.

You really captured both of them so very well, sweetie! I loved this to bits, sweetie, it made me smile and feel so happy. I must say that it was the perfect follow up to Fear. *hugs*

[scifiangel.livejournal.com]

Thank you. After my angsty rant on my journal this morning, I went out and had a great day. I felt like writing something a bit steamy.

I must say that it was the perfect follow up to Fear.

I tried to keep the same flow to the story that I had in the last one so it would go together. I'm glad it worked.

[scifiangel.livejournal.com]

Just posted a sequel to this: Completion (http://community.livejournal.com/wintercompanion/125853.html#cutid1)

[firefly124.livejournal.com]

Guh! Love their contrasting thoughts, which somehow make this all the hotter.

[scifiangel.livejournal.com]

Yes, they do view this encounter from very different angles. I'm pleased you like it.

[scifiangel.livejournal.com]

Just posted a sequel to this: Completion (http://community.livejournal.com/wintercompanion/125853.html#cutid1)

[whogate.livejournal.com]

Beautiful. I love Jack/Nine and you write them wonderfully. It is interesting to watch their relationship progress from both their viewpoints. I hope you do more in this universe.

[scifiangel.livejournal.com]

Nine/Jack is definitely growing on me. Once I finish the Captain!verse story I'm currently working on I'm going to start a full Nine/Jack AU story. I already have the outline done and some of the dialog.

[scifiangel.livejournal.com]

Just posted a sequel to this: Completion (http://community.livejournal.com/wintercompanion/125853.html#cutid1)

[navaan]

Wow, very sexy. Well done!

[scifiangel.livejournal.com]

I love it when I get a "wow" out of my readers. BTW, I just posted a sequel to this: Completion (http://community.livejournal.com/wintercompanion/125853.html#cutid1)