http://von_gelmini.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] von_gelmini.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] wintercompanion2010-06-02 03:56 pm

von_gelmini: First Time (Jack/Nine) [PG]

Title: First Time
Author: von_gelmini
Fandom: Doctor Who
Characters: Nine!Doctor/Jack
Rating: PG
WordCount: 370

Written for wintercompanion challenge: First Time



First Time


“There has to be something.”

Jack laughed. “Doctor, if you can find anything I haven’t tried, you’re welcome to do it.”

And so the challenge began. Between adventures, when they were alone, the Doctor would try to come up with something.

The Doctor thought about it. “Zero gravity?”

“Come on. Space ship, remember? More creative if you’re going to win this bet.”

“Ice?”

“Is very nice.” Jack grinned.

“Heat?”

“Branding.” Jack grimaced. “Not my favorite thing in the world, but better when you’re in bondage.”

Rose came into the control room and the game had to be suspended.

“I’m sure you’ve tried dozens of combinations of multiple partners,” the Doctor proposed once she left.

“Hundreds of combinations. Alien and human. But more than about eight or ten and it just gets confusing.”

One by one the Doctor ran through every kink he could imagine. When he was alone he had the TARDIS look up the ones he couldn’t imagine. Apparently Jack’s imagination was better than his. He decided to go simple.

“Swimming pool?”

Jack rolled his eyes.

The Doctor ran down the list of the TARDIS’ usual rooms. They all seemed to have some equivalent on some planet somewhere.

At last he’d thought of one. Had to be.

“Zero room!”

“Big quiet place, I mean dead quiet?”

The Doctor nodded.

Jack smirked. “Me and Rose. Last week. She was in there doing yoga or something. That girl has absolutely amazing flexibility.”

“Sex with the TARDIS,” he said triumphantly. The lights of the console room turned positively pinkish. “You didn’t!”

“She made the first move,” Jack said quickly.

The Doctor gave the console a playful smack. “Naughty girl.”

“Give up?” Jack laughed.

“You ever been in love?” The Doctor pulled out his last card.

Jack stumbled. “Of course. Yeah. Sure. Dozens of times.”

The Doctor looked at him skeptically.

“Okay. Yes. I’ve been in love,” Jack said, with more sincerity than he’d intended to show.

“Ever made it with that bloke?”

“No.” Jack said quietly.

The Doctor stepped close to Jack, backing him into the console. He put his arms on either side of him. “Would you like to?”

Jack nodded silently.

“I win.” the Doctor leaned forward and claimed his prize.
yamx: (Default)

[personal profile] yamx 2010-06-02 09:06 pm (UTC)(link)
I'd say they BOTH win. *g*

And yay for Jack being so extremely Jackish. *g*

[identity profile] nightrider101.livejournal.com 2010-06-02 09:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Loved this!

Sex with the TARDIS was positively priceless. :)

Yes, they both definitely win. Great job, and thank you for sharing!
trobadora: (Jack kissing by kataclysmic)

[personal profile] trobadora 2010-06-02 09:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee, that's fabulous! I agree with [livejournal.com profile] yamx, clearly they both win. :D

[identity profile] sahiya.livejournal.com 2010-06-02 10:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww. This was really sweet.

[identity profile] laurab1.livejournal.com 2010-06-02 10:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww! Lovely :))
Edited 2010-06-02 22:09 (UTC)

[identity profile] wynkat1313.livejournal.com 2010-06-02 10:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Awesome!

[identity profile] ana-rpm.livejournal.com 2010-06-02 10:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Great story! Loved the sex with the Tardis. ;)

[identity profile] scifiangel.livejournal.com 2010-06-02 11:15 pm (UTC)(link)
I so love this. Jack's in love. They diffenately both win.

[identity profile] wendymr.livejournal.com 2010-06-02 11:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, very good! Though it took the Doctor a long time to come up with that one *g*

I think that now the Doctor needs to see Rose's flexibility for himself, though ;)

[identity profile] silvermoon-06.livejournal.com 2010-06-03 01:45 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, this is absolutely adorable, I was giggling happily when the Doctor finally came up with one to stump Jacky boy. He he.

Boy, did he throw Jack for a loop just for a tiny second. And, I have to agree, they both win on this one, and it is definitely a sweet prize--for both of them. ;)

This was brilliant, I loved it very much, and I've saved it to my memories. :D
ext_17795: (grin)

[identity profile] dshael.livejournal.com 2010-06-03 02:22 am (UTC)(link)
Aww! :)
ext_348818: Jack Harkness. (Nine)

[identity profile] canaana.livejournal.com 2010-06-03 03:00 am (UTC)(link)
Oh. Wow. Starts out as crack and ends up just breathtaking.

[identity profile] shinodabear.livejournal.com 2010-06-03 09:13 pm (UTC)(link)
I can't avoid being an echo of the other comments. That was rather brilliantly done.
navaan: (Chucks)

[personal profile] navaan 2010-06-04 07:46 am (UTC)(link)
“Ever made it with that bloke?”
“No.” Jack said quietly.
The Doctor stepped close to Jack, backing him into the console. He put his arms on either side of him. “Would you like to?”


Oh, I loved that. Such an adorable picture. Well done!

[identity profile] ebineez01.livejournal.com 2010-06-07 05:08 pm (UTC)(link)
loved this. It was really well done, hinting at the erotic sex life of Jack without actually going there - thanks for writing
ext_230999: (Doctor/Jack)

[identity profile] kimuracarter.livejournal.com 2010-06-08 02:15 am (UTC)(link)
Love it! Fantastic! And yes, I LOLed at the bit with the TARDIS!sex.

[identity profile] redpearl-cao.livejournal.com 2010-06-08 05:26 pm (UTC)(link)
The ending is so sweet!

[identity profile] royalladyemma.livejournal.com 2010-08-17 03:44 am (UTC)(link)
don't suppose you've written Jack & TARDIS, have you????? but you've thought about it a lot, huh -- did you bring enough for everyone? mind sharing with the rest of the class? thought not. so, now we're waiting.... and waiting..... you get the pix -- hurry up!!!! i can tell you're thinking about it right now!!!!!

[identity profile] rrr-nightingale.livejournal.com 2011-02-14 11:49 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG this is wonderful!)))
I love the Doctor's imperturbability, whatever Jack claims done!))) They are amazing))
Thank you very much, I'm still smiling! <3

[identity profile] rrr-nightingale.livejournal.com 2011-03-07 12:38 pm (UTC)(link)
I have understood that I like the fic so much, that I'd like to share it with my friends.
Could I translate this fic into Russian, please? Of course, I'll state that you are the author.

[identity profile] rrr-nightingale.livejournal.com 2011-03-07 03:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the kind permission, I am happy :-)