Thanks for commenting again after you already beta read it! I'm so glad you liked both the humor and the sweetness. Twelve, though he's not a metacrisis like TenII, has similar benefits from being partially based on a human whose skills at emotional communication are slightly better than the Doctor's norm.

Yes, Ten's comment to Jack about "the only man you'll ever be happy with" was certainly on my mind when I wrote this. He didn't know how rightly he spoke. ;)

Your appropriate icon is indeed almost appropriate. In order to achieve the three Jacks in your icon, we'd need to either cross somebody's timeline or locate another Time Lord to regenerate near the Captain.