Damn.

I didn't know it would be this dark, I wasn't expecting it so... Damn. Really socker-punched me. Not that it wasn't good, it was just so depressing.

A few sp mistakes:


"paranoid worry that once day the Doctor would get himself killed"- one day

"He had to safe the world and the Doctor wanted to stop him!"- save the world

"before Jack could reach the bottom and he screamed out his despair as the air around them began to burn"- botton?