Dora, I am in awe. I love this so much. I read a few days ago and didn't get round to commenting yet, but here you go: the whole concept of the Doctor killing Jack during sex, because he gets off on the temporal anomalies, on the universe twisting itself to accommodate the Fact, is brilliant and brilliantly executed. This is exactly what their relationship should be like: utterly dark and twisted.

The nightmare scenario is an excellent twist, too. I like how the Doctor imagines himself, limp and unconscious, being carried to the TARDIS in Jack's arms. Aww! ♥ But it is the dark stuff that truly speaks to me.