Oh, wow! Reading this gave me chills, and it's definitely very dark but extremely erotic though, in a twisted way. You certainly conveyed Jack's madness quite well, it really shows how much he's been through over all those thousands of years.

I love how you threw in the memories of Jack's time on the Valiant when he was the Master's plaything, that was very frightening. Poor Ten though, I do feel a bit sad for him, he seems to be just a shadow of himself. *hugs for Ten*